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Miss Storm Contest 2016

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I always love the Heroes of the Storm drawings, so I wanted to draw one myself. This one has taken a lot of hours. I would really appreciate some feedback, cause I want to improve! :) 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi there!
Just wanted to say that your use of colors is very good,the only thing that I could suggest you is to improve your character's anatomy and proportion,specially in the arms and in the legs,where the separation is not distinguishable.
The right arm of the character who's in the middle is somehow short,
straight and rigid,also the way that her thumb bends looks incorrect.

As an advice there are lots of deviants that submit figure posing sketches
maybe that could be helpful for you,it's not my intention to sound too bad,
but when I see someone who has a great potential and asks for some advice,
it will always be a pleasure to help,sometimes truth is not very welcomed,
but after all we all are here to help at each other,you seem to be a very
young artist who is developing her own style in a beautiful way,just keep practicing and you'll be a heck of an artist since your work already has
a great color and composition necessary to catch the attention of the
spectator....Thank you for creating nice art.

Have a wonderful week and I hope that my critique can be helpful.